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重生在崩坏

我强烈谴责我自己。
  • 2019/6/1 12:00:19 来自: 重生在崩坏  
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    This is my first book,though,it is not a original book.By asking some giants for suggestions,I have recognized some serious mistakes.
    Above all,I promise I will learn new things from the mistakes.I will not make any mistake in this way.
    Aside from that,what is worth mentioning is that there are always something unexpected
    happening in my novel.Although,it is not a novel novel,haha.
    Aimed at conveying something to adolescents,this book dont have amazing spots or words to arouse your interest(You know what I mean).
    Another thing to mentioned,foreigners always call the college examination in China Gao Kao.I just desire to say,there are just five days left.After that,I wil continue writing my novel.
    That is all.Thank you.
    (Well,it seemed that I didnt say anything about my novel.But,I think it doesnt matter at all?Yep.)


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- 2019/6/12 9:10:22回复
Please stop your showing showing action.[em:sfgirl:001] - 2019/6/12 15:57:22回复
[em:sfgirl:001][em:sfgirl:001][em:sfgirl:001] - 2019/7/31 16:21:49回复
Although you said a lot, I didn't understand a word. - 2019/7/31 19:26:47回复
@DrSnow [em:sfgirl:001][em:sfgirl:001] - 2019/8/3 19:35:01回复
日哦,这jb啥东西 - 2019/11/11 22:30:11回复
这是我的第一本书,但她不是原著。通过向一些大佬的意见,我意识到了我的错误。大致就因样,其他都是作者自己在扯皮条 - 2020/2/20 11:10:54回复
Your writing is very good, but I can't understand it. - 2020/5/5 19:20:37回复
看了看觉得挺好的啊 - 2020/5/5 19:38:30回复
@X9149 别看我书评……这个太羞耻了 - 2020/7/14 20:48:08回复
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名称:重生在崩坏
类型:科幻
作者:okyouyou
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