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身为超级英雄的我,被魔法召唤了

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  • 2016/4/1 16:21:29 来自: 身为超级英雄的我,被魔法召唤了  
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    at first when i saw this book i think it can be more better. when the writer wrote the part of the main character fight with the monster to protect others, I thought the writer really put 200% effort and that part was much exciting, the writers writing was great. at last. i want to said that was if the writer can have a daily update, the book will be greater. And try to write more plot about the brave which can Describe their characteristics more details to have more charter but not to let the plot go too fast.

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名称:身为超级英雄的我,被魔法召唤了
评分:8.8分
类型:魔幻
作者:布鲁斯·韦恩
字数:1610632字
更新:2017/7/20 22:05:57

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